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Fredaayy
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proper explained votes pl0x. ty
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henor vs fredaayy
henor- The Above Standard.
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Location : northern beaches
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I'm The King
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Henor
- Walk has improved, looks alot less forced but moves need to be restrung with each other which are killing your flow
- Move at 0;18, legs too far apart, looks sloppy and kills your walks consistency
- nice use of space, though you culd have used more of your front and back area eg. wiggle walk backwards instead of on the spot
- Air variation at 0;25 looks sloppy, your lifting your leg too far out and it looks forced too, the transition into needs work
- shuffle transitions from side to side still need work, they look unnatural in your walk atm, not smooth; also a flow killer
- Nice variety of moves; props
- execution; put some more attitude into your walk, a thing about your walk is it's too plain and you need more energy when you execute your moves
- beatride was fairly on point (y)
Fredaayy
- Flow was fairly consistent throughout the video (y)
- Repetitive; constantly using wiggle walks and crown hops throughout the video; work on adding more v varies
- dominant with v varies on 1 leg; add some varies to your other leg; also try to add some more to your dominant leg; i don't see much variety
- space was well used, but same pattern and predictable; left back to right using wiggle walks and crown hops then repeat over and over agin
- Your beatride needs work; youhit like 30% of the bass claps; itll make your walk more entertaining to watch by beatriding and by lyricriding
- Moves well transitioned into each other
- walk looks somewhat developed in comparison to Henor whos restringing his walk together.
I felt Henor supplied to the table; he had more variety in his walk but was less developed and flow needed work. If Fredaayy had had more moves and less repetition in his walk; i would have easily given my vote to him.
Also noting that Henor's beatride was on point in comparison to Fredaayy who didn't as many bass claps; made it more entertaining to watch Henors.
Both walkers need some dusting up to do
MY VOTE: Henor
- Walk has improved, looks alot less forced but moves need to be restrung with each other which are killing your flow
- Move at 0;18, legs too far apart, looks sloppy and kills your walks consistency
- nice use of space, though you culd have used more of your front and back area eg. wiggle walk backwards instead of on the spot
- Air variation at 0;25 looks sloppy, your lifting your leg too far out and it looks forced too, the transition into needs work
- shuffle transitions from side to side still need work, they look unnatural in your walk atm, not smooth; also a flow killer
- Nice variety of moves; props
- execution; put some more attitude into your walk, a thing about your walk is it's too plain and you need more energy when you execute your moves
- beatride was fairly on point (y)
Fredaayy
- Flow was fairly consistent throughout the video (y)
- Repetitive; constantly using wiggle walks and crown hops throughout the video; work on adding more v varies
- dominant with v varies on 1 leg; add some varies to your other leg; also try to add some more to your dominant leg; i don't see much variety
- space was well used, but same pattern and predictable; left back to right using wiggle walks and crown hops then repeat over and over agin
- Your beatride needs work; youhit like 30% of the bass claps; itll make your walk more entertaining to watch by beatriding and by lyricriding
- Moves well transitioned into each other
- walk looks somewhat developed in comparison to Henor whos restringing his walk together.
I felt Henor supplied to the table; he had more variety in his walk but was less developed and flow needed work. If Fredaayy had had more moves and less repetition in his walk; i would have easily given my vote to him.
Also noting that Henor's beatride was on point in comparison to Fredaayy who didn't as many bass claps; made it more entertaining to watch Henors.
Both walkers need some dusting up to do
MY VOTE: Henor
Slazy- Administrator
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Henor
started off well, but then variations kinda went off, the straight v's looked awkwardish, it seems as though whenever you move to your left/use your left leg for variations you loose control and makes your wlak look really undeveloped, make sure you work on both sides
beatride was t5here in parts but you missed alot of beats and relied on stomps/stepbacks
shuffle spin could use some work,
walk got repetitive fairly fast, but thats part of developing your walk, add in more variations i see alot of potential in your walk by the way your starting to develop but for now everything needs to be fixed up a bit, seems disjointed almost
fredaayy
got really repetitive, i suggest you choose a slower hip hop song because speed can be to blame for reptitiveness at times
you hit some of the beats, but same as henor reliant on the stomps/stepbacks
wiggle walk, crown hop came out alot in this video
although its reppy youre executions seem to be fairly clean and the walks pretty smooth through the video, energy didnt drop
i see you tried to add in some other variations right at the end
should try that more often and develop them
Vote goes to Fredaayy
More developed walk,
started off well, but then variations kinda went off, the straight v's looked awkwardish, it seems as though whenever you move to your left/use your left leg for variations you loose control and makes your wlak look really undeveloped, make sure you work on both sides
beatride was t5here in parts but you missed alot of beats and relied on stomps/stepbacks
shuffle spin could use some work,
walk got repetitive fairly fast, but thats part of developing your walk, add in more variations i see alot of potential in your walk by the way your starting to develop but for now everything needs to be fixed up a bit, seems disjointed almost
fredaayy
got really repetitive, i suggest you choose a slower hip hop song because speed can be to blame for reptitiveness at times
you hit some of the beats, but same as henor reliant on the stomps/stepbacks
wiggle walk, crown hop came out alot in this video
although its reppy youre executions seem to be fairly clean and the walks pretty smooth through the video, energy didnt drop
i see you tried to add in some other variations right at the end
should try that more often and develop them
Vote goes to Fredaayy
More developed walk,
Revilo- The Above Standard.
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henor
- Walk looks better, a lot less forced. Still a little stiff though.
- Cute intro xD
- Beatride wasn't too bad. Could have emphasised them a bit more though, or hit them with something other than a stepback, which is what you used a lot.
- 0:18 didnt look too good. Neither did the air varie. Went too far out i think.
- Good mix of varies
- Work on the shuffles. Trans into them wasn't that good. Looked like you just hopped into them. Shuffle spin could use work too.
- Last few air varies didn't look clean, although its probably cos you ran out of energy.
Fredaayy
- flow is pretty smooth aye. I like it
- however, beatride was pretty bad. Hit almost none of the claps. Choose a slower song. If it means having to lose your flow cos you have to slow down, so be it. Works out better in the long term in terms of entertainment and battles like these.
- got heeell rep with the wiggle walks. counted at least 5 of them. v-varies got pretty rep too...actually, pretty rep overall.
- transitions are pretty smooth, as well as you're executions.
Henor had better beatride and more varies, but looks plain and choppy. Fredaayy is a lot smoother but is pretty reppy. Hard vote, but I'd have to go with Fredaay on this one due to a higher entertainment value
Note: not being biased against henor here. Completely impartial
Good luck!
- Walk looks better, a lot less forced. Still a little stiff though.
- Cute intro xD
- Beatride wasn't too bad. Could have emphasised them a bit more though, or hit them with something other than a stepback, which is what you used a lot.
- 0:18 didnt look too good. Neither did the air varie. Went too far out i think.
- Good mix of varies
- Work on the shuffles. Trans into them wasn't that good. Looked like you just hopped into them. Shuffle spin could use work too.
- Last few air varies didn't look clean, although its probably cos you ran out of energy.
Fredaayy
- flow is pretty smooth aye. I like it
- however, beatride was pretty bad. Hit almost none of the claps. Choose a slower song. If it means having to lose your flow cos you have to slow down, so be it. Works out better in the long term in terms of entertainment and battles like these.
- got heeell rep with the wiggle walks. counted at least 5 of them. v-varies got pretty rep too...actually, pretty rep overall.
- transitions are pretty smooth, as well as you're executions.
Henor had better beatride and more varies, but looks plain and choppy. Fredaayy is a lot smoother but is pretty reppy. Hard vote, but I'd have to go with Fredaay on this one due to a higher entertainment value
Note: not being biased against henor here. Completely impartial
Good luck!
khoa- Standard C-Walker
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Henor
-varies were aight, got a little rep but overall not bad.
-execution was a bit awkward and sloppy at parts (kinda looked like u lost balance, upper body somewhat looks stiff and un-relaxed). could do with some more defining and emphasis on your moves. loosen up a bit maybe.
-flow was okay, but could have been better imo, prob was due to bad execution on some moves.
-shuffles looked boring, try to incorporate more transitions for them instead of just shuffle spins at 0:52, 0:54 which i thought could have been executed stronger.
-beatride was aight.
Fred
-got really rep and boring especially with those wiggle walks and crown hops.
-execution and flow wasn't bad, pretty consistent and smooth for a fairly fast song but i wasn't really digging it.
-beatride was on and off, can do with more work. it looked to me like you were falling behind the beat at parts. try a slower song next time maybe.
Vote: Henor, to me was more entertaining. felt like he had a better feel for the song and overall more appealing walk.
-varies were aight, got a little rep but overall not bad.
-execution was a bit awkward and sloppy at parts (kinda looked like u lost balance, upper body somewhat looks stiff and un-relaxed). could do with some more defining and emphasis on your moves. loosen up a bit maybe.
-flow was okay, but could have been better imo, prob was due to bad execution on some moves.
-shuffles looked boring, try to incorporate more transitions for them instead of just shuffle spins at 0:52, 0:54 which i thought could have been executed stronger.
-beatride was aight.
Fred
-got really rep and boring especially with those wiggle walks and crown hops.
-execution and flow wasn't bad, pretty consistent and smooth for a fairly fast song but i wasn't really digging it.
-beatride was on and off, can do with more work. it looked to me like you were falling behind the beat at parts. try a slower song next time maybe.
Vote: Henor, to me was more entertaining. felt like he had a better feel for the song and overall more appealing walk.
Slazy- Administrator
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Yowzors- Standard C-Walker
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Henor
Well straight up. A tad boring.
Your beatride is definitely on and off. There are claps you obviously hit and that's good. But just as many that you miss.
There are some good basics and interesting varies, however they got repetitive a bit fast.
Work on flow, awfully choppy.
Freddaayy
Fairly rep fairly early.
Nice flow, lots of energy throughout the song
Same as Henor with beatride IMO. They were both on and off.
Just reiterating what Slazy said, maybe slow it down?
Walk was a bit flat. But decent base of moves.
Got a bit sloppy right at the end.
Both are developing walks, both need to walk on beatriding and both of you need to get some new varies going on! I'd say the flow was a killer for me, Henor needs to smooth it out
Vote FREDAAYY more developed walk and entertaining walk.
Well straight up. A tad boring.
Your beatride is definitely on and off. There are claps you obviously hit and that's good. But just as many that you miss.
There are some good basics and interesting varies, however they got repetitive a bit fast.
Work on flow, awfully choppy.
Freddaayy
Fairly rep fairly early.
Nice flow, lots of energy throughout the song
Same as Henor with beatride IMO. They were both on and off.
Just reiterating what Slazy said, maybe slow it down?
Walk was a bit flat. But decent base of moves.
Got a bit sloppy right at the end.
Both are developing walks, both need to walk on beatriding and both of you need to get some new varies going on! I'd say the flow was a killer for me, Henor needs to smooth it out
Vote FREDAAYY more developed walk and entertaining walk.
Slazy- Administrator
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Fredaayy wins with 3-2. Closed.
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