by LittleLew Mon Jul 16, 2012 2:36 pm
Lungy: -Your video was really entertaining to watch for me, at no point did I feel like you were getting boring / repetitive.
- Your flow was really nice, you had just the right energy for song, everything just went very smoothly.
- Your beatride was pretty good, so was your lyric riding, but I felt like you could hit the claps more convincingly in some parts, it would've made it a bit better and added your own unique touch to it.
- I really liked your forward shuffles, they were really awesome and I felt like nearly all of them suited the song.
- Something to improve on, I felt, would be the emphasis on the claps, would really make a difference, even though your beatride was pretty good already.
- I can't really see anything else I thought could have been better in the video, may just be me not being too experienced but I just really liked it start to finish.
Henor: - First off, I thought 0:38-0:40 was brilliant, looked really good.
-I thought you had nice attitude, it was pretty entertaining at 0:23 especially.
- I liked your beatride and lyric riding, I really felt the song.
- I thought it was a little stiff honestly, the flow wasn't very smooth and it seemed like you were almost sticking to the ground when you hit it.
- I found it got a bit boring towards the middle of the video, 0:38 really got me back into it but I would've liked to have been leaning forward the entire time.
- Things to improve on would have to be your flow / stiffness, I suggest trying to leave your iPod in your pocket or something, because when you clench your hand to hold it that often affects how relaxed you are in the other parts of your body (hope that helps). Also I think try and get more transitions, because I really liked a lot of the moves but it was the in between that was less thrilling.
- Otherwise really great video, I enjoyed it a lot, as I said some of the things (0:23 and 0:38) really made me go "cool",but there are just some visible things you need to develop. The fact that they are obvious is a good thing, because it means once you've fixed them, your cwalk will be insane.
My vote: I had trouble with this one, I felt like Lungy had a better video and the flow really kept me into it but henor had those single moves at certain points that made me rewind to watch again.
I am going to go with Lungy for a more developed walk and better flow / entertainment value, because those were the things I really remembered afterwards. I felt like Henor, if you relaxed and polished the stuff in between your attention grabbers, you would definitely notice the changes. Both of you had nice beatride and lyric ride so good work on that.
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